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We finally agreed to go on separate ways. But Franco still visits I tried my best to pushed him away by not answering the door, by not answering phone and his messages. He still has lingering feelings for me. So am I. So I better stay even farther away from him. I asked Jerry to take me in for the mean time. I am now staying at Jerry's house so Franco can't bother me. Jerry tried to comfort me of my pain. He is my very close friend anyway. Lately I've been drinking so much. I'm frequently visiting our bar.

"Tara we put up this bar so costumers can come and drink not for you to consume all the alcohol in this place. Why don't we go home." Jerry said. He ordered me to stand up and directed me to the car. I am so drunk. I'm drifting away. Good thing Jerry is there to help me. As we get home he put me on the bed. I pulled Jerry beside me.

"Remember what you told me before that I will beg you to marry me? How about I use that token now?" Tara that's crazy I'm not into marriage. I'm against it. I can't even understand why people has to commit on that silly thing." He answered immediately.

"Alright I won't force you to that thought but how about you stay with me tonight? I don't want to be alone. Please!" I begged him.

"You are joking me Tara. Just go to sleep, you're so drunk." I was pulling him down but Jerry run fast while laughing at me.☐☐☐☐☐☐☐☐☐☐☐☐☐☐☐☐